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You are a hidden heartbeat,  
A pale outline in a shadowed world.  Wrapped in the warmth of holding life,  
Held in innocent fetters, locked behind pale walls.  
 
Soon your prison will no longer be able to contain you,  
You will be free, breathe your first true breath,  
Share your only moment of true selfless love.  
 
For now you spread your not yet formed wings,  
And get lost in your shadow world dreams,  
How I wish I could be dreaming with you.
Gentle Little One
by =Wombat-Pentagram

What an innocent feel you kept within this poem. It would have been easy to lose that, but the line that truly keeps it in that innoce...

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I have hung you from the gold chain around my neck,  and each night I pray to find you at my door,  maybe this world is just a little too big, or just too crowded,  but then again I used to think it was way too small.   
I thought I lost this that day, in the broken bottles and dirt,  I couldn't find you from the tears in my eyes,  I was so thankful when I pulled you from that shining heart,  but I lost part of my hope that day, in that shining mess.   
Truly, I can not help but dream of one days and maybes,  and wish upon stardust that I flick out the windows of cars,  letting it to
Hanging stardust
by =Wombat-Pentagram

Alrighty.. I love how this poem goes from loss and sorrow to hope. I normally do not like it when only two lines in the whole poem rhy...

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I used to follow you around,  I was your shadow on sunny days, your stray moonbeam at night,  
You never seemed to notice me among brighter lights,  
You used to ignore me and pretended not to care.  
 
I used to think you were beautiful beyond compare,  And I couldn't help myself, I would just stare and stare.  
You used to drive away from me, and leave me cold,  
Standing there alone on your corner on rainy days.  
 
I used to go through your trash, in order to treasure you,  
I took it home in order to feel closer to you.  
You thought I was dirty and poor and you pitied me,  
I turned you into whispers..
by =Wombat-Pentagram

This is an interesting poem. It reminds me of a good old Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds "Murder Ballad". I do like how you transition fa...

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Come gather round and listen to a tale,  Clear all the thoughts and let your minds sail.  Smokey rooms, stone wall lined...  Drink-filled glass, someone cries....   
The Red-Coates are coming!!   
Nightly rides of Paul Revere,  nothing lives within but fear.  Kings and Knights at the round table;  Steeds resting,  in the grass near the stables.  Winds blow tall trees and grasses...   
 
To speak to my audience  I will need my glasses.  For though I have a tale to tell,  I must be able to see to do it well.   
 
We'll follow a path of
Storytime
by =Shivarra

I like this poem very much. You put a lot of effort into the atmosphere of a time and place perhaps only known in the fantastical land...

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My 11th Anniversary!!!

Journal Entry: Thu May 28, 2009, 12:35 PM
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So Sunday, March 31st, is my 11th year wedding anniversary!! It feels like we just had our 10th one.... in fact it feels like we just got married... ( Except for the bit of gray hair and the wrinkles ) LMAO! Frank (hubby and ~SilverFoxKnows ) is taking tomorrow off and so we will have a three day weekend this weekend!! I think,if we have the mula we are going to go to Koisan, the best sushi/sashimi place in S. California. The even wear kimonos there.


I cannot wait to spend this anniversary with only the one I love the most, my favorite, my best friend, and husband!

Please, if you congrats here, go to his page ( come on it only takes a second to do ), just hit the ~SilverFoxKnows (name) and you are there. That will make both of our days!

Take care all!

-me

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To get to the contest just click on the stamp below and there should be a link to the contest in the Artist's Notes, if clicking on the thumb doesn't take you directly there :heart:

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-Ophelia

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  • Mood: Stupefied
  • Listening to: The sound of my blessed air conditioning
  • Watching: My ciggarette burn. Yes I smoke and I love it :P
  • Eating: squits ( or bisquits )
  • Drinking: Coffee...love love love love all my coffee!

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Southern California
  • Interests: RPGing, drawing, writing, messing around with my computor.
  • Favourite movie: MirrorMask, Watchmen
  • Favourite band or musician: Right now I would have to say Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds & PJ Harvey.
  • Favourite genre of music: True Alternative.
  • Favourite artist: Picasso, Mattisse, Van Gogh..the list honestly goes on and on.
  • Favourite poet or writer: T.S. Eliot, A.R. Ammons (to name a couple of them)
  • Shell of choice: You mean along with my own skin, I get a shell like Dr. Zoidberg did?
  • Wallpaper of choice: My pic of the smiley face button with blood on it from "Watchmen"
  • Skin of choice: My own thank you very much!
  • Favourite game: Planescape
  • Favourite cartoon character: Buttercup from the PowerPuffGirls...been told I'm alot like her.
  • Personal Quote: "Can I please have a piece-o-pad-o-paper?" -Me
  • Tools of the Trade: "My "brain"!...hurts... It will have to come out!" -Montey Python's Flying

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=Scarlettletters:iconScarlettletters: Jul 2, 2009, 7:47:06 AM
Many thanks for the faves!

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You may be right
I may be crazy
But it just may be a lunatic you're looking for
Turn out the light
Don't try to save me
You may be wrong for all I know
But you may be right
=CSnyder:iconCSnyder: Jun 8, 2009, 9:27:56 AM
:iconbowplz:thank you my friend:hug:
=CSnyder:iconCSnyder: Jun 2, 2009, 1:11:41 PM
:iconbowplz:thank you my friend:hug:
=WhiteBook:iconWhiteBook: May 26, 2009, 3:55:25 AM
Thank you so much for :+fav:ing my work, I really appreciate :heart:

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Write on me... :jsenn:
=Wombat-Pentagram:iconWombat-Pentagram: May 19, 2009, 5:42:24 AM
thanks for the favourite :) glad to see some of my pieces are still liked

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"to dream perchance to wake anew"...
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