While the sun did slip
From the sky above
I decided to take a trip
And look for my long lost love
I traveled through Spring flowers
All yearning for the light
I felt myself empowered
My love for him grew to new heights
Along this path I knew
That I could bring forth all I had
Walking out of the blue
I left behind the baggage, so glad
That I could bring forth
What love I held inside
And never change course
And never have to hide
As I rounded a hilltop
My love came into sight
My heart it nearly stopped
For his life he did fight
As I ran to him
My eyes ablaze with tears
His eyes they did dim
With his last breath I drew him near
I screamed into the night
My heart it did break
This couldn't be right
I howled out my rage
But his light was gone
Forevermore I would cry
And eternally long
An acidic rain filled the sky
I let it burn my skin
Until my heart it did reach
I let the rain burn everything within
My soul became charred and bleached
There was nothing left of me
Nothing left of him
Together forever we would be
Our bodies blown to the four winds















Critiques
"I traveled through Spring flowers
All yearning for the light
I felt myself empowered
My love for him grew to new heights"
I could almost see the person traveling through the flowers. That verse right there is amazing poetry. And the then it takes a turn to sorrow, and such a wonderful job you have done.
Really great poem, Heather my friend.
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