I was entranced by the Sun
I decided to fly away
And follow it for fun
Little did I know my direction would change
As the Sun did set
The Moon did rise
And I did let
My gaze lose sight of the prize
As I traveled ever forward
My eyes full of this silvery disk
I angled my wings toward
Never understanding the risk
The sky became darker still
The stars and Moon did slip
Out of my sight no matter what I willed
There was a change of course on this trip
The darkness swallowed all of the light
That was left in the inky black sky
No matter how very much for it I did fight
I was left alone , not even asking why
As I was enveloped by the blackest night
Comfort within this darkness
Comfort without a seering light
My heart became filled with an aimlessness
I wondered if I would return
To the world of light
And realized I would not turn
That this course I would not fight
I decided that I would not go back
No matter what the cost
Because I did not leave tracks
And I did not leave anything behind.... I'm not lost














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It flows well in most places, and rhymes well, and I love the originality and the concept here.
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I love the fact that you chose to be original and it's not a poem full of sorrow and woe, the very last line, *I'm not lost* is perfection. I love it!!! Great job my friend.
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"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"
And I'll look down and whisper "No."
-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
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-Ophelia
"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"
And I'll look down and whisper "No."
-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
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-Ophelia
"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"
And I'll look down and whisper "No."
-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
And welcome.
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"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"
And I'll look down and whisper "No."
-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
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